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What revisions would I make to other unit projects?

For other unit projects I would probably completely rewrite them, as I said in my reflective letter I had trouble understanding how to properly write the topics in unit 3 and 4. I struggled to write a proper version of these projects so I would go back and look at the examples again and maybe watch some YouTube videos on how to properly write about these topics.

Revised Unit 3 Project/The changes I made

Natural Science Revised Draft

For this revision I just fixed my conclusion and tried to connect it with the data that was found and the beginning paragraph. My original essay was not really connected, I brought up a theory and tested it but never talked about the theory in my conclusion. I attempted to connect that theory in my conclusion, I feel as if it overall made the paper make more sense.